rough cut feed back

guitar to guitar playing, also in time, (jase is out of time)
not really in an order all just been thrown together, needs more shape and structure
bring in walking earlier, need lots of movements fast cuts for start, will give good contrast for when singing starts.
Some people thought the fact that band members didnt show much movement made it a bit boring, we disagreed.
others felt that no movement worked and that because we are purposely static that it worked. we agree on this and is how we wanted it to be and feel that movement would ruin it and ruin the
Lighting was very popular. people felt that some long cuts of in the lighting where to long, we agreed.
we feel we need to add more edits and ajust the coulours of some shots, like on the shot of front man walking on his own through town is very bright doesnt fit in. This clip needs to also be added in earlier.
overall there is not enough structure to the video, needs much more movement, quicker cuts. At the minite there is alot of footage being wasted. right now it has just all been chucked in a doesnt really feel like a music video.